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National Honour · January 2099

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Aiko Tanaka

🇯🇵 Japan · leading poet of the nation's field


“Cranes at Dusk”

93out of 100
Creativity23/25
Emotional Impact23/25
Structure18/20
Language19/20
Theme10/10

Paper folds remember hands that folded them and let them go. The river keeps what no one plans, a thousand wings, a thousand slow.

From the judges

Spare and exact; the image of folded cranes carries grief lightly, and the restraint is its strength.

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